Sunday, 20 July 2014

ode to poetry



image: google

i am the bee looking for nectar
you show me how to get it
taking me from one emotion to other
exploring all of them
i get dizzy but you hold me
pushing me to accomplish
the honey flows in the words 
words coming from my heart
taking me with them
i loose myself in it
becoming one with you
i find peace





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18 comments:

  1. Victoria Ceretto-Slotto20 July 2014 at 10:29

    I love this metaphor. Right now we have so many bees in the garden (and hummingbirds). I love thinking I try to gather words like they gather nectar. Lovely

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  2. Arathi Harihar20 July 2014 at 10:43

    thank you victoria..

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  3. PirateGunn20 July 2014 at 10:47

    Beautiful testament.

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  4. Mary20 July 2014 at 11:06

    I love the idea of the honey flowing in the words coming from one's heart. I am sure this produces some beautiful poetry!

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  5. Gabriella20 July 2014 at 11:16

    Want a great ode! Now wonderful when we can simply lose ourselves in poetry.

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  6. Sherry Blue Sky20 July 2014 at 11:47

    I love this......the honey of words from the heart!!!!

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  7. ZQ20 July 2014 at 12:59

    Yes, well expressed. Sweet experience!
    ZQ

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  8. NataĊĦek20 July 2014 at 13:18

    poetry as a way to keep peace of mind.

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  9. Grace20 July 2014 at 15:37

    I like the use of metaphor, bee looking for a nectar ~ Words coming from the heart are precious, I agree ~

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  10. Anonymous20 July 2014 at 21:11

    This is wonderful...giving life to the poetry. :)

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  11. Sumana Roy20 July 2014 at 22:12

    love to lose myself in the nectar of words flown from different hearts...a very well crafted poem :)

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  12. Brian Miller21 July 2014 at 08:37

    i often find peace in words as well...and find myself in that role of the bee looking for nectar to make such honey....very cool metaphor...smiles.

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  13. Vandana Sharma21 July 2014 at 10:04

    Such a beautiful ode:)

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  14. alan170421 July 2014 at 10:36

    Love this and so well crafted, well done.

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  15. Intelliblog21 July 2014 at 16:24

    Ah, the sweet words of poetry that so unexpectedly, often hide a sting!

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  16. Katie Mia Frederick21 July 2014 at 21:16

    Ahh..sometimes i feel like my computer is just a little working bee..connecting to the hive..of minds..of the hive mind of poetry..
    and yes..i'm just a little drone..singing a song...

    to the Queen bee..

    wherever she is..
    so i keep humming a song..and buzzing away...

    to please the Queen with words..
    and images ..too..as they come as
    well..free flying..away..connecting to hive..

    just buzzing along...alone...allone....

    as well...

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  17. Katie Mia Frederick21 July 2014 at 21:17

    yes...swell bee i am..;)!

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