Saturday 28 June 2014

Alone



Smile teasing her lips

She looked in his eyes

Her reflection winked

Words choked her throat

Love caressed her heart

Alas, understanding dawned

Even in love she was alone



7 comments:

  1. Strong writing, Arathi. So sad if one is also alone in love.

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  2. I like how you built up tension and created expectations before we realize only one person is in love.

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  3. This is very sad, to be alone in love, to love and not be loved back.

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  4. Being in love with someone who isn't in love with you... Is there a sadder feeling? You expressed a lot in few words. I like this so much!

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