Friday, 20 June 2014

Rhythms


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Music is resonating in the Universe
Calling me to Sing
I drown in it's Melody

Music is resonating in the Universe
My soul vibrates with Joy
Awakening my innate nature

Music is resonating in the Universe
Calling me to Sing

I have tried the Triolet form for the prompt repetition in poetry


36 comments:

  1. we just have to quiet ourselves enough to hear it...
    once you catch the tune it is easy enough to sing...
    happy friday

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  2. Music is such a powerful part of our lives.

    I really enjoyed this loose-limbed triolet; the traditional form is a bit stricter than yours, but you have a successful poem and that's what it's really all about ... smiles

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    1. Thank you ...i am glad that my first attempt in triolet makes sense..smiles..

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  3. Gorgeous! When I read this I feel like singing too.
    All the best to you --

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  4. Sometimes the call of the music cannot be ignored. I like this, Arathi.

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  5. It is a tune we should try and listen to more often, the music and voice of the universe.

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  6. I love the refrain, music resonating in the universe ~

    Have a good weekend ~

    Grace

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    1. Thank you Grace..you have a good weekend too..:)

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  7. that made me smile cause i sing all day long... on my bike, in the shower, when preparing dinner... i love when there's music in the air...smiles

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    1. Me too..I just cant keep quiet..smiles...

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  8. nice repetition... I def love to sing (even though I sound awful) still... lol

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    1. aw.. it's ok you can sing along....smiles

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  9. Music is so integral to who we are...almost defines us, I think. I love playing with musical metaphors. Nice triolet

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    1. True Victoria..music is /has been my inner strength...

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  10. A musical triolet - makes me think of some Alice in Wonderland version of musical chairs.

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    1. smiles..i am glad that you enjoyed it:)

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  11. so true! universe is resonating in music - if we will just listen - and then sing along - K

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  12. I liked this take Arathi. Music is indeed playing. Well done.

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  13. It's so important to be in tune with something higher and finer than this mundane life...beautifully written...

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  14. Music is in breathing, it is in the heartbeats....it is everywhere...only you have to listen. :)

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  15. It reminds me of the music of the spheres. Nice lighthearted poem!

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  16. The triolet was the perfect form up choose for your delightfully joyful piece!

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  17. and what will we be without music? :-)

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  18. Oh yes that music -- when I hear it I sing too...

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