Sunday, 8 June 2014

Moon

Image : Google

When the sun finally went down, sky felt parched

Without you she was empty and void

She waited to quench her thirst; you crescented slowly

You came to her with your cooling rays

You knew she was waiting for you

She was thrilled to see your full smile

Oh, Moon you made her your slave!

For ~ Poetry Jam,  For ~ Poets United

24 comments:

  1. Ah! the soothing moon, can make anyone its salve:)

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  2. ha. the moon def has that kinda seductive power...and i like the interplay between the sky and the moon too...how different it is than the sun..

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  3. Where would the poets be if not for the moon! :)

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    1. sure ..poets and moon always have a inspirational relationship

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  4. There really is something about the moon that we all identify with, I think. It is always comforting to see it up in the sky!

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    1. true..and it gives the sky such a wonderful look..:)

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  5. The moon has a special quality to it that resonates with many people. You have shown this very powerfully.

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  6. ah yes - the magic of the moon.... i'm her slave as well you know...smiles

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    1. Hmm..that's a nice thought..smiles:)

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  7. Beautiful moon poem, and I love the image.

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  8. I also thrilled. Thank you for making me smile!

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    1. I am at your service madam..thank you:)

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  9. I'm most amazed when I see the moon during the day. Somehow it makes me feel like the night has been cheated on . . .

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  10. I specially like: Oh, Moon you made her your slave!

    Good one & Nice to meet you ~

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    1. Thank You Grace...nice to meet you too:)

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