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When the sun finally went down, sky felt parched
Without you she was empty and void
She waited to quench her thirst; you crescented slowly
You came to her with your cooling rays
You knew she was waiting for you
She was thrilled to see your full smile
Oh, Moon you made her your slave!
For ~ Poetry Jam, For ~ Poets United
Mmmm, yes, moons do that.
ReplyDeleteYes...it does..:)
DeleteAh! the soothing moon, can make anyone its salve:)
ReplyDeleteThanks Vandana...:)
Deleteha. the moon def has that kinda seductive power...and i like the interplay between the sky and the moon too...how different it is than the sun..
ReplyDeletethanks Brian:)
DeleteWhere would the poets be if not for the moon! :)
ReplyDeletesure ..poets and moon always have a inspirational relationship
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DeleteThere really is something about the moon that we all identify with, I think. It is always comforting to see it up in the sky!
ReplyDeletetrue..and it gives the sky such a wonderful look..:)
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DeleteThe moon has a special quality to it that resonates with many people. You have shown this very powerfully.
ReplyDeletesmiles..thank you Gabriella..:)
Deleteah yes - the magic of the moon.... i'm her slave as well you know...smiles
ReplyDeleteHmm..that's a nice thought..smiles:)
DeleteBeautiful moon poem, and I love the image.
ReplyDeleteThanks sherry :)
DeleteI also thrilled. Thank you for making me smile!
ReplyDeleteI am at your service madam..thank you:)
DeleteI'm most amazed when I see the moon during the day. Somehow it makes me feel like the night has been cheated on . . .
ReplyDeleteThank You :)
DeleteI specially like: Oh, Moon you made her your slave!
ReplyDeleteGood one & Nice to meet you ~
Thank You Grace...nice to meet you too:)
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