Saturday, 28 June 2014

Summer Dreams


Image: Google

scorching heat from sun

burning down all misery

hope rising from the womb

new born full of innocence

awaiting for new beginning

dreams taking rhythmic steps

creating a colorful picture of Life




10 comments:

  1. I never thought of scorching summer burning down all misery - an arresting image. To me it seemed to burn down life itself and leave dead scorched earth behind - but you see the rebirth in all that. Lovely.

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  2. i like the feeling of rebirth in this....we have to walk the fire at times in order to get to it....to burn away all the things keeping us from it...

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  3. I like the idea that the sun burns away all misery & allowing hope to rise in its place. Wonderful concept really!

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  4. I tell you the sun really does burn the misery for me - but I didn't know it until Inread your writing!

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  5. Rebirth ...the sun burns the misery away...and hope rises. lovely!

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  6. the sun reveals too - secrets prefer to hide

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  7. Beautiful done and i love those words of life

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  8. Ah, what a hopeful picture you have painted here. Lovely piece.

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  9. May the sun scorch lots of misery this summer and dreams create a colorful picture of Life! Great write, Arathi.

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