Thursday 16 October 2014

canorous


image: google

coming into my life

canorous tune of love

consuming my pessimism

crafting eternal joy

coalesce in life's canvas

creating heavenly picture

ceasing my worldly existence


for ~ dVerse poets pub

topic : pleaides form of poetry
this form has seven lines with six syllable in each line  and  each line beginning with same letter as the title 

meaning of Canorous is Melodious


18 comments:

  1. I think this works perfect with the beautiful singing you presented for the Tuesday prompt.

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  2. "ceasing my worldly existence"....ah...heavenly indeed :)

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  3. ah! music has that exhilarating effect on us!!

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  4. Oh, an entrancing little piece. Cool, Creative and Charming.

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  5. The tune of love creating a heavenly picture, I like that ~

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  6. hopefully love does not have to take your life...but it can def be all consuming...and change everything...ha...in a good way hopefully....

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  7. Nice - the fact that love can consume pessimism is a good thing!

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  8. Love can feel just as you've described it.

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  9. what an invitation... hospitality is missing in this world

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  10. Canorous an unlikely word to choose, but truly magical in your rendering...

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  11. I love the inclusion of melody in this...poetry and music go hand in hand and work well with this form.

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  12. crafting eternal joy..now, that would be a work of art..

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  13. I especially like "crafting eternal joy".

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  14. It seemed to dance melodiously! Good lines Arathi!

    Hank

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  15. I love the healing effect of 'tune of love' ~ 'consuming my pessimism'.
    Nice. x

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  16. Groovy piece. Love the last three lines.

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  17. You've taught me a new word; canorous. Very tidy & melodious take on the prompt, working the legs off the letter "C".

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