coming into my life
canorous tune of love
consuming my pessimism
crafting eternal joy
coalesce in life's canvas
coalesce in life's canvas
creating heavenly picture
ceasing my worldly existence
for ~ dVerse poets pub
topic : pleaides form of poetry
this form has seven lines with six syllable in each line and each line beginning with same letter as the title
meaning of Canorous is Melodious
topic : pleaides form of poetry
this form has seven lines with six syllable in each line and each line beginning with same letter as the title
meaning of Canorous is Melodious
I think this works perfect with the beautiful singing you presented for the Tuesday prompt.
ReplyDeleteThank you Bjorn..smilses
ReplyDelete"ceasing my worldly existence"....ah...heavenly indeed :)
ReplyDeleteah! music has that exhilarating effect on us!!
ReplyDeleteOh, an entrancing little piece. Cool, Creative and Charming.
ReplyDeleteThe tune of love creating a heavenly picture, I like that ~
ReplyDeletehopefully love does not have to take your life...but it can def be all consuming...and change everything...ha...in a good way hopefully....
ReplyDeleteNice - the fact that love can consume pessimism is a good thing!
ReplyDeleteLove can feel just as you've described it.
ReplyDeletewhat an invitation... hospitality is missing in this world
ReplyDeleteCanorous an unlikely word to choose, but truly magical in your rendering...
ReplyDeleteI love the inclusion of melody in this...poetry and music go hand in hand and work well with this form.
ReplyDeletecrafting eternal joy..now, that would be a work of art..
ReplyDeleteI especially like "crafting eternal joy".
ReplyDeleteIt seemed to dance melodiously! Good lines Arathi!
ReplyDeleteHank
I love the healing effect of 'tune of love' ~ 'consuming my pessimism'.
ReplyDeleteNice. x
Groovy piece. Love the last three lines.
ReplyDeleteYou've taught me a new word; canorous. Very tidy & melodious take on the prompt, working the legs off the letter "C".
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