Tuesday 20 May 2014

The Song




 Edward Hopper, 1922 



When eyes met over a candle flame

They fell into a timeless space

Spontaneously trusting with heart

Dancing in delight

Mask falling from their face

Revealing what they truly are

A beautiful Love song played in Silence

12 comments:

  1. A beautiful love song played in silence.........Lovely....

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  2. sometimes words are not needed as much as the feeling the infuses the moment...

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  3. Beautiful. Nicely reaching that melodic truth.

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  4. Very pretty. You pick up on the intensity the couple have, as if they're the only people in the room.

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  5. The silence of the murmuring crowd, like a babbling stream ....nice

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  6. Warm, delicate, romantic...beautifully done.

    This is the first time i got a chance to read your poems, and i must say before i leave that it was a joy reading them. Keep posting :)

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