Tuesday, 20 May 2014

The Song




 Edward Hopper, 1922 



When eyes met over a candle flame

They fell into a timeless space

Spontaneously trusting with heart

Dancing in delight

Mask falling from their face

Revealing what they truly are

A beautiful Love song played in Silence

For ~ Magpie
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12 comments:

  1. Cait O'Connor20 May 2014 at 03:27

    A beautiful love song played in silence.........Lovely....

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  2. Brian Miller20 May 2014 at 12:00

    sometimes words are not needed as much as the feeling the infuses the moment...

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  3. Helena20 May 2014 at 15:01

    Beautiful. Nicely reaching that melodic truth.

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  4. Rhissanna20 May 2014 at 22:19

    Very pretty. You pick up on the intensity the couple have, as if they're the only people in the room.

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  5. Arathi Harihar20 May 2014 at 22:34

    Thank You Rhissanna :)

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  6. Silent Otto 21 May 2014 at 02:59

    The silence of the murmuring crowd, like a babbling stream ....nice

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  7. JANU22 May 2014 at 09:23

    Truly a nice song.

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  8. yash gupta26 June 2014 at 02:20

    Warm, delicate, romantic...beautifully done.

    This is the first time i got a chance to read your poems, and i must say before i leave that it was a joy reading them. Keep posting :)

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