Thursday, 22 May 2014

A New Beginning




Oh, sky being a mute witness to this world

 Are you crying ?

Are you touched by the loss of naive human lives?

Have you heard the sob of the trees?

Did you see the Innocent plea of animals?
Unleash your anger with thunder and lightning
Wash away all the sins with your tears
Let there be a new beginning with the rainbow

 For ~ Poetry Jam



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30 comments:

  1. Brian Miller22 May 2014 at 10:19

    nice...rain makes a great metaphor for the cleansing...
    and the rainbow, hope, in hte after...nice write.

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    1. Arathi Harihar23 May 2014 at 06:12

      Thank You Brian....hope for future is what keeps us going right..:)

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  2. alan170422 May 2014 at 10:51

    Cleansing and freedom in your words that usher in hope,

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  3. Gabriella22 May 2014 at 14:26

    I am with you here. After the rain it can really feel like the old order has been washed away and new beginnings are possible.

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  4. Peggy22 May 2014 at 20:30

    Yes let there be a new beginning with the rainbow.

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  5. Gillena Cox23 May 2014 at 02:54

    Exquisite use of metaphor,

    Much love...

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  6. Mary23 May 2014 at 05:01

    I love the way you used questions in your poem. And hopefully the new beginning...and rainbow will be on the horizon.

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    1. Arathi Harihar23 May 2014 at 06:18

      Yes Mary...I think everyone is ready for a new start..:)

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  7. Susan Lindquist23 May 2014 at 08:08

    What a beautiful plea to the maker of rains ...

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    1. Arathi Harihar28 May 2014 at 09:22

      Yes Susan..hope our plea reaches his ears..:)

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  8. Helen23 May 2014 at 12:09

    Lovely ode to sky, to rain.

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  9. Sumana Roy23 May 2014 at 20:23

    an exquisite close and wonderful use of metaphors....

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    1. Arathi Harihar28 May 2014 at 09:23

      New beginning is always welcome..:)

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  10. Swathi Shenoy25 May 2014 at 01:30

    that was a lovely write up arati :)

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  11. Namrata26 May 2014 at 04:16

    The beginning with Questions was refreshing... I loved the way incited the feeling from lifeless objects.

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  12. Unknown26 May 2014 at 06:37

    My reason for liking the rainy season...it is cleansing...literally and metaphorically.

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  13. Laurie Kolp27 May 2014 at 08:22

    Love "sob of the trees"...

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    1. Arathi Harihar28 May 2014 at 09:28

      Many humans don't want to hear them...Thanks Laurie

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  14. Anonymous29 July 2014 at 08:25

    Wonderful ! :)
    Anjali Ramanna

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