Friday, 9 May 2014

CHILD




Child



Eyes dripping with innocence

Skin shimmering with softness

Steel in the grip, a glimpse of toughness

Anger peeping now and then

Angels take a bow at you

Love connects you with all

My child, you are my extension.





16 comments:

  1. I like that neither the child nor the narrator are perfect!

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  2. A strong bond between parent & child, beautifully written :)

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  3. Thank you Janu...you are my mentor:)))

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  4. Stunning in its clarity and strength ..very special indeed :)

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  5. Love is such a connector between generations. I enjoyed this!

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  6. You never realize that the child has a strong grip....when it gets stronger thats when the love grows stronger ;-) Well written...

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  7. I like the way you conveyed the bond between mother and child.

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  8. Thank you Gabriella...that's how I feel when I see my two daughters:)))

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