Saturday, 14 February 2015

coalescing in silence


image: google

deep inside the heart

I dwell in silence

witnessing the play of life

illuminated by me

when the play is over

quietude remains


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14 comments:

  1. Brian Miller14 February 2015 at 11:01

    it is sweet to see the play of life...
    and perhaps if we draw still enough we will find it...
    smiles

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  2. Bev14 February 2015 at 11:13

    Quietute remains...I love that

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  3. Bev14 February 2015 at 11:14

    Quietute remains...I love that

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  4. Jae Rose15 February 2015 at 01:40

    Quietude is a real gift to discover

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  5. Gabriella15 February 2015 at 14:10

    You make us feel that quietude is a most welcome gift!

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  6. Mary15 February 2015 at 14:18

    Ah, it is good to have that place of silence within one's heart. This poem gives me a feeling of peace.

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  7. Sumana Roy15 February 2015 at 22:59

    love the meditative tone...it's always wise to be the observer....

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  8. Fascinating Quest15 February 2015 at 23:31

    Quietude... Yes!
    When we demand silence, isn't it really quietude we crave for? You got it so right.
    On a lighter note, when the teacher shouts 'Be Quiet', may be she expresses her need for silence better :)

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  9. alan170416 February 2015 at 01:45

    The heart a place of silence, really can taste the comfort in this.

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  10. Unknown16 February 2015 at 20:43

    Loved your poem.. Peaceful!

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  11. Susmit17 February 2015 at 11:28

    Amidst the tranquility, I search for the answers.....Thoughts, so well conveyed!!

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  12. Donna Smith17 February 2015 at 11:47

    " witnessing the play of life" - I enjoy quiet, and doing just that.

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  13. Intelliblog17 February 2015 at 22:18

    I am glad that silence turned to quietude. It is a more positive lack of sound! Lovely.

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  14. Sok Sareth3 August 2017 at 17:58

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