tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4762521749988174629.post2706818594431539347..comments2023-10-29T05:58:55.465-07:00Comments on Raagas Of My Life: Marshmallow FieldsArathi Hariharhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17142420236345157881noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4762521749988174629.post-36444722177669643922014-06-27T22:38:04.123-07:002014-06-27T22:38:04.123-07:00that was really different and rocking!that was really different and rocking!Ankita https://www.blogger.com/profile/08423815874935620837noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4762521749988174629.post-16770388888710066692014-06-27T16:18:44.168-07:002014-06-27T16:18:44.168-07:00Perfect dada, disjointed and mysterious! Nicely do...Perfect dada, disjointed and mysterious! Nicely done Arathi!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4762521749988174629.post-89924003224765079502014-06-27T15:28:23.517-07:002014-06-27T15:28:23.517-07:00You opted for the harder of choices, random words ...You opted for the harder of choices, random words (cut out or imagined) that absurdly connect with each because you have directed them too; like an abstract artist, Picasso turning a bicycle into a bull, just because he said so. Nice response to the prompt. Glenn Buttkushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10680725814199700692noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4762521749988174629.post-66905403124880166272014-06-27T14:44:22.164-07:002014-06-27T14:44:22.164-07:00On point, plied they (the ballerina nonsense word)...On point, plied they (the ballerina nonsense word) arabesque, jenet turn and lift in tours astounding shouting deafening feet, so sweet they protest gravity. <br /><br />Liked it much!Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4762521749988174629.post-70057926276087480552014-06-27T13:33:25.998-07:002014-06-27T13:33:25.998-07:00Yes, no-sense words do, do ballet! Good work!Yes, no-sense words do, do ballet! Good work!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4762521749988174629.post-72578562573511257682014-06-27T12:54:53.913-07:002014-06-27T12:54:53.913-07:00no-sense words do ballet
trying to // search /...no-sense words do ballet<br />trying to // search // myself .... love thatAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4762521749988174629.post-816083667428691782014-06-27T12:34:52.814-07:002014-06-27T12:34:52.814-07:00I love the idea of 'marshmallow fields' an...I love the idea of 'marshmallow fields' and the dance at the end adds a very happy touch.Gabriellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09968615376035959259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4762521749988174629.post-849567290502087322014-06-27T11:13:57.786-07:002014-06-27T11:13:57.786-07:00Marshmallow fields forever... wonderful title... a...Marshmallow fields forever... wonderful title... and yes this is very visual.. not the least in structure..brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4762521749988174629.post-19350099351076424852014-06-27T10:10:04.890-07:002014-06-27T10:10:04.890-07:00Reading yours, I realized how much synesthesia can...Reading yours, I realized how much synesthesia can be a Dadaist tool. So well captured.Victoriahttp://liv2write2day.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4762521749988174629.post-61611362048208505332014-06-27T09:30:26.595-07:002014-06-27T09:30:26.595-07:00Thanks Sumana:)Thanks Sumana:)Arathi Hariharhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17142420236345157881noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4762521749988174629.post-11408306873923023692014-06-27T09:29:45.523-07:002014-06-27T09:29:45.523-07:00Thanks Mary..:)Thanks Mary..:)Arathi Hariharhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17142420236345157881noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4762521749988174629.post-42525734345895863382014-06-27T09:29:15.263-07:002014-06-27T09:29:15.263-07:00Thanks Brian..my younger daughter loves marshmallo...Thanks Brian..my younger daughter loves marshmallows and she talks non stop..smiles..I see her a lot in this poem..Arathi Hariharhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17142420236345157881noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4762521749988174629.post-64160283129896147642014-06-27T09:27:05.800-07:002014-06-27T09:27:05.800-07:00Thanks Grace:)Thanks Grace:)Arathi Hariharhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17142420236345157881noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4762521749988174629.post-71327521777962123122014-06-27T08:49:22.642-07:002014-06-27T08:49:22.642-07:00"memory melting horizon / formless energy&quo..."memory melting horizon / formless energy"..i love this part and the search for self in this crazy world...<br />Sumana Royhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4762521749988174629.post-9233262976292916632014-06-27T06:01:32.700-07:002014-06-27T06:01:32.700-07:00Well I can see dada as 'no sense words do ball...Well I can see dada as 'no sense words do ballet.' And your poem was quite a dance. Smiles.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4762521749988174629.post-54408322877190076562014-06-27T04:21:48.312-07:002014-06-27T04:21:48.312-07:00ha. there is a nice movement to your words....that...ha. there is a nice movement to your words....that is accented by the structure///marshmallow fields could be fun...ha....to what lengths we will go to find ourselves eh? smiles.Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4762521749988174629.post-53860484700802268812014-06-27T03:58:18.558-07:002014-06-27T03:58:18.558-07:00First, that title and picture are so eye-catching ...First, that title and picture are so eye-catching ~ Formless words and no-sense words doing ballet, looks entrancing ~ Trying to search oneself is always a journey ~Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.com