Saturday, 14 February 2015

coalescing in silence


image: google

deep inside the heart

I dwell in silence

witnessing the play of life

illuminated by me

when the play is over

quietude remains


14 comments:

  1. it is sweet to see the play of life...
    and perhaps if we draw still enough we will find it...
    smiles

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  2. Quietute remains...I love that

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  3. Quietute remains...I love that

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  4. Quietude is a real gift to discover

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  5. You make us feel that quietude is a most welcome gift!

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  6. Ah, it is good to have that place of silence within one's heart. This poem gives me a feeling of peace.

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  7. love the meditative tone...it's always wise to be the observer....

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  8. Quietude... Yes!
    When we demand silence, isn't it really quietude we crave for? You got it so right.
    On a lighter note, when the teacher shouts 'Be Quiet', may be she expresses her need for silence better :)

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  9. The heart a place of silence, really can taste the comfort in this.

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  10. Amidst the tranquility, I search for the answers.....Thoughts, so well conveyed!!

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  11. " witnessing the play of life" - I enjoy quiet, and doing just that.

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  12. I am glad that silence turned to quietude. It is a more positive lack of sound! Lovely.

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  13. to enjoy life - the silence and the play of life. Beautiful.

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